Questions about pitch

Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on?
My music pitch went well but there is always parts where i didn't give enough information about and that is how I'm going to show the window being smashed and also how i will do this with out engaging attention from the public. I may do this whole scene near a scrap yard or ask permission to go in there and smash a car window but otherwise i will need to take this part out of my music video.


What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?
The strengths that the audience may have identified would be the choice of clothing i will have in my video and also the idea of having the clothes a certain colour like red. as i said about the colour in my presentation i saw most people nodding their heads because they thought it was a good idea and that they can easily know who the main person was in my video.


What did your audience identify as areas of improvement?
The areas that the audience said i can improve on will probably be the idea of moving to a different location because being local can seem quite boring so exploring somewhere else could make the video seem more entertaining. Another area to improve on will be the age group that i have chosen for this song, my age group estimation was 17-25 but i was told that many 13 year olds' are acting like gangsters so i may have to reduce my age group to 13-25. 


What changes will you make to your music video concept based on the feedback you received?
when considering feedback into my presentation i will say that i got a lot of help from the audience and that most of the information told to me can help me out with my video. The feedback that i was told was about my locations, narrative throughout video, ethnicity, cast, younger aged gangsters, gang detected, avalibility to clothes, transport, background (dark), pace of lyrics, gang causing mayhem and other camera styles. All these points will be thought about before i attempt to start my music video, i will need to think about lighting and location and also about my cast that i will have in the video. Other feedback that really helped me out was the idea of being able to include the main cast member in the video for the whole time and also what really helped was the timing of day and that at twilight the lighting can varyn throughout this time period so technically i have to chose either night time or day light.